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i am enjoying the story ^_^ but the pages are filled with large portions of negative and positive spaces which, when evenly distributed is really nice 
which this one has some nice gray tones to kinda even things out. However the ones before it i feel like its to much white vs black space. one page of the contrast would also be good if it is to make a scene emboldened like Clamp does many times in their graphic novel "Clover" but with their highly contrasted pages comes extremely detailed characters that are enjoyable to focus on. my suggestion is to work on creating background and landscape concepts to help fill the white backdrops of your scenes. not only will this even out your negative and positive space but it will also give the wonderful world you have created more depth. 
which this one has some nice gray tones to kinda even things out. However the ones before it i feel like its to much white vs black space. one page of the contrast would also be good if it is to make a scene emboldened like Clamp does many times in their graphic novel "Clover" but with their highly contrasted pages comes extremely detailed characters that are enjoyable to focus on. my suggestion is to work on creating background and landscape concepts to help fill the white backdrops of your scenes. not only will this even out your negative and positive space but it will also give the wonderful world you have created more depth.